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#information #numbers #participants #activities #centre #melbourne #australia #period
The given line graph illustrates how many distinct activities Overall activities whereas Moreover activities Then this activities In contrast Additionally
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Vocabulary
: Replace the words activities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary
: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary
: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
- participants
- social centre
- comparison
- trends
- consistently popular
- gained popularity
- lost popularity
- community interest
- availability of facilities
- social factors
- economic factors
- external events
- economic downturns
- health crises
- demographic changes
- aging population
- marketing
- community outreach programs
- participation rates
- Melbourne
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